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"It's in these tangled thoughts
I swear", I holler as I dig.
It was here, everything I wanted to say.
My words never form fast enough
Then the thought slips away.
Please tell me that you'll stay.
Be patient as I try to sort things out.
Give me a minute before I start.
Or it will all be a rushed ramble
Were nothing at all makes sense.
Please give me a moment because,
I had a list of things to say.
Now-a-days it seems as if,
If I don't write it down
the thoughts and words accompanying them
will flee.
Faster than wild birds set free.
I never know how to start.
I tip toe around you,
Because I don't know what to say.
How to not upset you.
But I can't do that,
because I promised to tell the truth.
But you don't want to hear me
Because it tears you up inside
And I can understand but I need
Someone to listen, please just listen.
But when I find you my audience
I don't know where to go
Because as I mentally pick up
Each thread of thought
And follow it through to your reaction
I see something ugly and put it down
Only to pick up another with the same end image.
I don't think you understand that.
And maybe I really am loosing it.
I'm finally tipping into crazy.
But give me a minute and maybe the words will surface.
I think and let the thoughts rush up to me, through murkiness.
Only speaking the phrase that repeats itself
Because that's how I know it needs to be said.
If I find myself clinging to one string of words.
They must be the right ones to say,
To spill out onto the space between us
And try to build a bridge of understanding.
But sometimes the words fail my expectations
And you float farther away.
And it's all because I had so much to say
But the words, they just don't want to stay.
And now I know you can't understand
Because I crawled into your bed and woke you
With tears to your chest and now that I'm here
I can finally breath and the thoughts have stopped
Throwing themselves around my head.
But now I'm left empty
With nothing left to explain why I'm here
And why your shirt is covered in my salty tears.
You're worried and you keep asking what's wrong
Only to be met with my silence.
Your question keeps getting louder
Till I know I must reply and I only whisper
"I don't want to talk about it."
Because I know that will get me by for now.
You'll leave it be and just hold me.
And what I know to be true is proven
As you soften and move to let me fold into you.
You hold me and let the tears take there course
Before gently whispering in my ear
"Please tell me what's wrong. What happened?"
I still can't think so I let the question go for now.
I'm desperate for just a little more time curled into you.
I rest my head back on your chest and let the tears fall,
Your hand gently rubs my back, reminding me you're here.
My breaths slow and it gets easier to think again.
I breath you in and reach for a kiss because if I can get one.
I may be able to surface from these rapids.
All I can say is you calm me, you melt me
When I'm panicking and desperate
Just being close to you can bring me back.
I return to my search and find that everything I was thinking
And worrying about on my walk here is gone.
Everything I wanted to say,
Everything that could have explained this..
This unexpected strange good morning.
The words seem to have left.
But you're patient and ask simple questions
Ones with easy answers
Till I'm ready to think again
To let the flood over take me because I know
You're my anchor and this time I won't be swept away.
I let it overcome me again and struggle to breath
For a few minutes but soon, you have me comfortable
And the words somehow find there way to the surface
And my tongue willingly excepts them.
And I try to explain the best I can
What happened and what's wrong but,
The list I thought up seems to,
Still not want to show it's face
And I'm trying to make sense
Because, love you're the only one who listens anymore.
And I suppose that is what caused all this,
No one else wants to hear me but I'm desperate to be heard,
So I had to find you, to let my thoughts escape.
Because I know with you whatever I say
You will always love me.
No matter what escapes my lips in a desperate time like this
I will always be able to explain it to you.
Because I can breath for real around you
And I have time to find exactly what I'm trying to say
Because you're so patient with me.
Please love never leave me alone in the rapids
Because I very easily could drown.
I swear", I holler as I dig.
It was here, everything I wanted to say.
My words never form fast enough
Then the thought slips away.
Please tell me that you'll stay.
Be patient as I try to sort things out.
Give me a minute before I start.
Or it will all be a rushed ramble
Were nothing at all makes sense.
Please give me a moment because,
I had a list of things to say.
Now-a-days it seems as if,
If I don't write it down
the thoughts and words accompanying them
will flee.
Faster than wild birds set free.
I never know how to start.
I tip toe around you,
Because I don't know what to say.
How to not upset you.
But I can't do that,
because I promised to tell the truth.
But you don't want to hear me
Because it tears you up inside
And I can understand but I need
Someone to listen, please just listen.
But when I find you my audience
I don't know where to go
Because as I mentally pick up
Each thread of thought
And follow it through to your reaction
I see something ugly and put it down
Only to pick up another with the same end image.
I don't think you understand that.
And maybe I really am loosing it.
I'm finally tipping into crazy.
But give me a minute and maybe the words will surface.
I think and let the thoughts rush up to me, through murkiness.
Only speaking the phrase that repeats itself
Because that's how I know it needs to be said.
If I find myself clinging to one string of words.
They must be the right ones to say,
To spill out onto the space between us
And try to build a bridge of understanding.
But sometimes the words fail my expectations
And you float farther away.
And it's all because I had so much to say
But the words, they just don't want to stay.
And now I know you can't understand
Because I crawled into your bed and woke you
With tears to your chest and now that I'm here
I can finally breath and the thoughts have stopped
Throwing themselves around my head.
But now I'm left empty
With nothing left to explain why I'm here
And why your shirt is covered in my salty tears.
You're worried and you keep asking what's wrong
Only to be met with my silence.
Your question keeps getting louder
Till I know I must reply and I only whisper
"I don't want to talk about it."
Because I know that will get me by for now.
You'll leave it be and just hold me.
And what I know to be true is proven
As you soften and move to let me fold into you.
You hold me and let the tears take there course
Before gently whispering in my ear
"Please tell me what's wrong. What happened?"
I still can't think so I let the question go for now.
I'm desperate for just a little more time curled into you.
I rest my head back on your chest and let the tears fall,
Your hand gently rubs my back, reminding me you're here.
My breaths slow and it gets easier to think again.
I breath you in and reach for a kiss because if I can get one.
I may be able to surface from these rapids.
All I can say is you calm me, you melt me
When I'm panicking and desperate
Just being close to you can bring me back.
I return to my search and find that everything I was thinking
And worrying about on my walk here is gone.
Everything I wanted to say,
Everything that could have explained this..
This unexpected strange good morning.
The words seem to have left.
But you're patient and ask simple questions
Ones with easy answers
Till I'm ready to think again
To let the flood over take me because I know
You're my anchor and this time I won't be swept away.
I let it overcome me again and struggle to breath
For a few minutes but soon, you have me comfortable
And the words somehow find there way to the surface
And my tongue willingly excepts them.
And I try to explain the best I can
What happened and what's wrong but,
The list I thought up seems to,
Still not want to show it's face
And I'm trying to make sense
Because, love you're the only one who listens anymore.
And I suppose that is what caused all this,
No one else wants to hear me but I'm desperate to be heard,
So I had to find you, to let my thoughts escape.
Because I know with you whatever I say
You will always love me.
No matter what escapes my lips in a desperate time like this
I will always be able to explain it to you.
Because I can breath for real around you
And I have time to find exactly what I'm trying to say
Because you're so patient with me.
Please love never leave me alone in the rapids
Because I very easily could drown.
Literature
Addiction
I hurt so much
I wish I wasn't so scared
Or so easily won over
I wish I didn't have trust issues
But can you blame me?
People say they are there for you
But if you show them how you really are
Or even give them a tiny peek
They freak on you
Or take steps away from you
Its hard
They make me feel like such a freak
I try not to be so negative
I try my best to be understanding of others
But never to myself
I'm not much of a fan of myself
Why would I be?
I'm nothing but a compulsive liar
All I want is attention
And I try to hide away the pain
I'm nothing but a pathetic excuse of an addict
Addict to various substances
Literature
Ouch....
It hurts,
I did it to myself,
And it hurts.
I wanted it,
I needed it,
I broke my promises for it
So Im glad that it stings.
Im glad of the pain,
It helps me distinguish,
Today isn't the same.
What would you do if you knew?
What would you say if I showed you?
I feel so guilty,
Like you're betrayed,
But it's become an obsession,
And I it's slave.
I want you to see me,
To share me,
But maybe not this part
You and my obsession,
You're tearing me apart.
I did this to myself
I needed it,
I wanted it, I did it to myself.
And it hurts
Literature
Help Me..?
I thought I hit
Rock bottom
I thought I could
Only go up now
I though it was
Hard then . . .
Letting go of the wall
I fall faster
It wasnt the bottom
Just a shelf
I cant see anymore
Nothing but black
A bit farther everyday
Not getting better
Not OK
I hope for light
But I learn
The black only gets darker
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So I think I had a panic attack just a little bit this afternoon and the wonderful boyfriend was the only thing that was able to save me from the rushed illegible thoughts in me head
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This is a great piece. It really says it all.
I can completely relate to the feeling of not being able to grasp your own thoughts enough to express them. I can never seem to get them out in a way that makes sense when I try to explain, especially considering I don't want to hurt the people I care for even more.
You can be more than glad that you've found a person who enables you like that! I'm happy for you
xxx